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The first few moments of a presentation must be strong attention getters for speeches, as this is when listeners will form their first impressions and set expectations for what’s to follow. Therefore, you must quickly grab your listeners’ attention – and keep it. The way to do it? A great speech hook. A hook is like an intro for a song on the radio; if it’s not catchy enough to give the audience a reason to listen, they’ll let their mind wander or change the station.
What Is a Speech Hook and How Does It Work?
A hook is a presentation-opening tactic that immediately captures your audience’s attention, engaging them so that they want to listen to what you have to say. As the word implies, it’s like bait on a fishing hook – something enticing that draws in your audience for the rest of the speech. To maximize engagement, the hook must come at the start of the talk. The speaker must begin strong, right out of the gate.
Attention grabbers for speeches have become an increasingly valuable tool in modern speeches, especially broadcast ones, to reach a wider audience. According to research done by Gloria Mark, PhD, attention spans have shrunk over the last two decades. Mark, whose research specializes on how digital media affects our lives, calculated the average attention span for a person looking at a screen was 150 seconds in 2004, 75 seconds in 2012, and hit new lows of 47 seconds in recent years, as discussed in a February 2023 episode of the "Speaking of Psychology" podcast published by the American Psychological Association.
How Do You Make a Good Hook?
So, what’s a good attention grabbing statement? While effective hooks are often grounded in the speaker’s personal story to make their presentation more relatable and emotionally compelling, there’s no single right answer. The “perfect” speech hook, if one were possible, depends on the topic and type of speech, the speakers’ strengths and credibility, the target audience, and myriad other factors that can make or break the engagement.
But there are some basic speechwriting guidelines that can help almost any speaker craft the right hook. J. Lyman MacInnis, corporate coach and author of The Elements of Great Public Speaking, laid out five key speechwriting tips in an article for the Public Affairs Council:
- “Know your audience.”
- “Choose your core message.”
- “Research and organize.”
- “Develop structure to deliver your message.”
- “Spice it up.”
Put simply: To write a good hook, play to your talents as a speaker and cater your message to your audience.
12 Killer Hooks to Grab Your Audience’s Attention
If you’re struggling to find the right hook, here are 12 examples that can help you grab your audience's attention.
1. Use a contrarian approach.
When introducing a speech, an effective way to grab attention can be to state a universally accepted statement and immediately contradict it. This technique pushes the audience to buck conventional wisdom and approach the rest of the speech with an open mind, even if the ensuing points are unexpected or challenge preconceived notions.
Many great speeches ask rhetorical questions. These questions, used to make a point rather than elicit an answer, invite audience members to reflect personally.
For example, a software programmer can open a speech on modern data tools by saying, “In the age of massive data collection, data is everything. But what if I told you that information overload can be riskier than ignorance? When we base decisions on data without enough context or direction, we might delay our analyses. This means outdated insights could blind business leaders to what’s really going on.” This approach highlights the complexity of the topic and hints at where the speaker will go next.
2. Ask a series of rhetorical questions.
Many great speeches ask rhetorical questions. These questions, used to make a point rather than elicit an answer, invite audience members to reflect personally. This can provide a unique way to contextualize the speaker’s words.
In one of history’s most well-known speeches, Patrick Henry’s 1775 “Give Me Liberty or Give Me Death” speech, Henry asked a series of rhetorical questions as an emotional plea to win over his audience, the Second Virginia Convention. “Is this the part of wise men, engaged in a great and arduous struggle for liberty? Are we disposed to be of the number of those who, having eyes, see not, and, having ears, hear not, the things which so nearly concern their temporal salvation?” He employed this rhetorical device again to close his speech, asking four more questions before ending with his infamous title.
3. Deliver a compelling sound bite.
By opening with a catchy phrase or memorable sound bite, speakers can grab the audience’s attention and immediately establish a broader context – or theme – for their talk. To choose an effective speech hook, find a brief and compelling statement that supports your message. Then, add context to show how this reference point fits into your overall speech.
Famous quotes are often paraphrased to complement a speech, but be sure not to change them so much that they become unrecognizable or lose their intent. Consider Martin Luther King Jr.’s 1963 “I Have a Dream” speech, which begins with an homage to Abraham Lincoln’s 1865 Gettysburg Address: “Five score years ago, a great American, in whose symbolic shadow we stand today, signed the Emancipation Proclamation.” This juxtaposition helped King place his civil rights speech within a larger historical context.
4. Make a startling assertion.
If you’re stumped on how to make a good hook for your next speech, try researching a surprising or amazing fact that illustrates the significance of your argument. It can earn your audience’s attention, but only if you put statistics or large claims into easily digestible terms.
5. Reference a historical event.
Another good attention-grabbing way to introduce a speech is to mention a relevant historical event. For example, if the date of your speech coincides with a significant event related to your topic, it can add a sense of grandiosity and relevance. To find noteworthy events, online resources can provide comprehensive lists of significant occurrences in history, sports, and more.
6. Use the word “imagine.”
Another effective hook for speeches relies on the word “imagine.” Inviting the audience to imagine something can help them picture a better tomorrow while you pitch a new idea – or the consequences of not heeding your speech’s lessons. Imagination can also put the audience in someone else’s shoes, creating empathy.
7. Add a little show business.
Movies and theater occupy a central place in our culture, making them powerful tools for connection. Opening a presentation with a well-placed pop culture reference can quickly establish a rapport with your audience and get their attention. If you get stuck writing a speech, there’s no shortage of inspirational movie speeches to draw inspiration from. Such references can make your speech more relatable and memorable.
8. Arouse curiosity.
Sparking curiosity is another powerful way to grab attention. To do this, start with a statement designed to make the audience sit up and take notice. A surprising juxtaposition can be an effective way to make the audience want to learn more.
9. Use quotations differently.
Hooks often involve quotes, but differentiating yours can avoid clichés while making a stronger impact. For example, instead of stating “A journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step,” you could add a twist: “We’ve all heard that a journey of a thousand miles starts with a single step. But we need to remember that a journey to nowhere also starts with a single step.” This approach can make the quote more thought-provoking and memorable.
You can also consider using unique quotations from your own life, such as wise words from a grandparent or mentor, or search online or use apps for quotations. These personal touches can add authenticity and relatability to your speech.
10. Quote a foreign proverb.
A novel speech hook is to quote a proverb your audience might not be familiar with. There is a wealth of global material to pull from, and these phrases can offer a new perspective outside of your culture’s norms. Here are some examples:
- “Who begins too much accomplishes little.” (Germany)
- “You'll never plow a field by turning it over in your mind.” (Ireland)
- “The nail that sticks up will be hammered down.” (Japan)
- “A person is a person through other persons.” (South Africa)
However, before using any foreign phrases, be sure to confirm its accuracy. It’s also smart to carefully read and understand any important context to make sure it’s appropriate for your talk.
11. Walk through a “what if” scenario.
Another compelling hook for speeches is a “what if” scenario. For example, asking “What if you were debt-free?” at the start of a money management presentation can help your audience look forward to a positive future and apply the information in your speech to their own life. “What if” concepts are easily adaptable, as hypothetical examples can be catered to almost any presentation.
12. Tell a story.
People are more inclined to follow and understand speeches if the speaker tells a compelling story. According to research and analysis by the Psychonomic Bulletin & Review and the NeuroLeadership Institute, the human brain can process memorable images in as little as 13 milliseconds, or 75 frames per second, even when images are described in words. Descriptive language and narratively connected information engage the audience and allow them to process the information faster and deeper than disconnected points.
The Journey of Storytelling
An effective presentation needs more than just a strong attention grabber, but a successful hook does wonders for capturing the audience during your critical first moments under the spotlight. Storytelling skills also play a role, but storytelling talents should be maintained to stay effective. Keep editing and practicing your speeches until they’re just right for your audience.
These tips can help you start on the right foot, setting the stage for a compelling and memorable speech.
Read more about effective storytelling here: 10 Tips for How to Tell Your Story.
A version of this article was originally published on April 11, 2013.
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